I write about one girl, one night,
That night when everything fealt right.
That wild night, your bed was shook,
That night, a precious gift I took.
That wild night, I let you down,
When we did more than 'fool around'.
I let my feelings take the wheel,
Was not true love that we did feel.
I know I should have tried to fight,
My hormones on that wild night.
We knew wrong, and we knew right,
That didn't stop that wild night.
It seemed to be so right to me,
But now so wrong, I finally see.
Regret what we did, that wild night,
That night, my guilt reached a new height.
So now I lay me down to sleep,
Our purity, we did not keep.
That wild night, I gave you mine,
No innocence, for me, I find.
-Lo Ruhamah
I know all too well what you mean
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my poem "A Bed With No Sheets" is quite similar.
That was great loved the way it's written and the way you could feel in this situation keep it up! Regards Michelle
This is by far one of the best poems I've ever read, you did a wonderful job putting this together. I can't wait to read your other poems. Well done A++++++
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wow..is all i have to say about this one...is wow... um...wow??? Molly *wowed*