When we first met,
we knew we would,
become best friends.
But when I heard,
you had to leave,
I had to think,
of the first time,
we ever met,
& made us best friends.
I knew how much,
you cared for me,
which led our,
friendship to grow,
intensively,
into a sprouting seed.
It appeared that you were,
much more than a friend,
and I would give anything,
to see you again.
As I remember,
you were just like,
a brother to me.
I could cry on,
your shoulders,
about a crush,
who left me,
shaking inside,
& you would hold me,
telling me it would,
be all right.
On a rainy day,
I was afraid of noises,
that spite my inner sides.
I would call you in fear,
& you would tell me,
you were near,
& always be here.
You always,
have been the one,
to see me through,
now it shows,
inside my heart,
how much I really,
miss my dear best friend.
Here I will wait,
strong and true,
to see your face,
once again.
so your poem is good but i think you don't express yourself i mean what you feel cause i feel a gip though your english is good! katiba