Bang! Boom! Crash! My heart breaks slowly, when I see him with her. Smash! Bump! Rip! It continues to break, as he holds her so tight. Sob. Sniffle. Sob. Continues my heart, as he kisses her.
This poem captures the moment with an absolute economy of words. Good work - keep writing, Keep the faith.
Its too good....... really touching.. i can feel it bcoz i have passed thru the same situation.....
This poem
captures the moment
with an absolute
economy of words.
Good work - keep writing, Keep the faith.
Its too good....... really touching.. i can feel it bcoz i have passed thru the same situation.....