Broken Heart

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Bang!

Boom!

Crash!

My heart breaks slowly,

when I see him with her.

Smash!

Bump!

Rip!

It continues to break,

as he holds her so tight.

Sob.

Sniffle.

Sob.

Continues my heart,

as he kisses her.

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Ernest Bevans's picture

This poem
captures the moment
with an absolute
economy of words.
Good work - keep writing, Keep the faith.

Punit Kumar Mukim's picture

Its too good....... really touching.. i can feel it bcoz i have passed thru the same situation.....