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Here Is My Heart
Folder:
Concrete-Make Their Own Shape OK. Well, Um, Look!
So, here it is!! My own heart!!
No, it is not new, Oh, No. But, it IS mine.
I just wanted to remind you, Sir, that you still
have it, since you stole it long, long, ago, and
I've been very lost since you snatched it out
You didn't even replace it with your own!!
You just took my heart, and trashed it!!
Trash--like old discarded paper. So
tell me if you can, why don't you
love me?? You took my poor
heart and I can't love one
single living soul ever
like I so love you.
Why don't you
love me??
Why?
??
?
BUT, Mine was used in a postive way...I printed it and used it to wrap a bracelet for my wife and bound it with a red ribbon and a single red rose. hee-hee. Scored major points.
HK
NICE! I luv how u've made the poem into the shape of the heart. Now that's a form of poetry that I havent tried to do. hmmm giving me ideas! THANX!! Its really quite interesting as well... I think I've been there so many times when a boy would take my heart and I cant seem to look at any one else but him. So attached! But really, they dont give a damn about me. Aw well, Thank goodness valentines is over this year! Hopefully, next year will be better :)
-Mavis
LoL nothing like "Hope" I thought it would be....LoL I liked that. Hehehe
Hi Jess,
Congratulations on poem of the week ! second let me say this poem is wonderful and very nicely done.
I myself would never of been able to do the same if I tried. You have great talent.
Keep up the good work. Stop by if you have a chance at my site.
I'll be back soon to read more.
Yvonne
Hey Jess, It has taken me a while to get here. So happy to have seen this. I really admire your style. what more can I say? Switch/Click=Good Night. Joyce/Spanky
Jessica,
A day after viewing your poem I am still amazed at the perfection of the image. You most certainly do have a style, besides a way with words. Thank your for this magnificent piece of concrete poetry. Linda
I like the things that concrete poetry can do visually as well as mentally. you do it well. Thanks.
WOW ~! Jess, this is incredible. I certainly admire your writing ability and YOUR GREAT talent. This poem is a perfect example.
Loved it!
Tricia
Haha, that's so cute! I enjoy this. Good writing!
This is so neat! It must have taken you a while to get this so perfect! I LOVE it!
Kris
Hi Jessica,
What a challenge that must have been to write a poem in a heart shape! You certainly have succeeded well! What a creative idea and great job of writing! Congratulations!
Helen
LMAO!! You are a dag! hehe :) You have done this so well Jess, mine didn't even look like a heart, so bad I gave up and deleted it! I'm having a few drinks (too many) LOL
I'll be back tomorrow to read more of your wonderful work!
Keep smiling,
Love Sarah