Even as a child I had the ability to imagine a different world at command. If I was bored or had to wait quietly for any length of time, I daydreamed a new scenario for myself. I still do it now, but I call it brainstorming for a plot for my stories.
Mmmm Secret places...
...such nice places to disappear to for a little while.
Nice poem, Jessica.
kat
Your secret place, sounds alot like mine....although mine is getting harder and harder to find lately. Wonderful poem. Ken
HI~ i have a secret place also,great poem,we all need our little cocoon to warm away from the cold cold world at times lol
my son is 11/24 wonder who'll get to 300 first you or me lol,were running neck and neck ,you & i 290 something
thanks for your comments L&P
JESSICA,
GOOD POEM. I LIKE TO DREAM. I REALIZE ALOT ABOUT MYSELF WHEN I DREAM. I LIKE YOUR POETRY AND CAN'T WAIT TO READ MORE. THANKS FOR SHARING.
Wow, what a moving and awe inspiring write.
The words create a picture unlike our harsh reality.
Reminds me of the feeling I get when inside my secret place.
Well done!
God Bless you
Amberlee
P.S.
Thank you for what you said about my work, you have no idea how you've touched me:)
i miss sugah
"Poe" I'm not, nor "Rich" am I,
but I'll be famous, b'ye and b'ye !
This isn't far from my place. Thanks for sharing the view.
Beautiful...I love this....as I do the same! Thank you for commenting on some of my poems also!
I think we all need our "Secret Place" to maintain our sanity.