Prophecy

I predict that some sweet day,

You'll realize your loss.

And when you do, you'll rue the time

You didn't count the cost.

Author's Notes/Comments: 

You know what they say about a woman scorned! hahaha

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Douglas Lazard's picture

I really, really like this one~`~
Your right!!!! There is nothing like a woman who's P.O'd
Peace ~~~~ Dougie ~~~~

Tim Derr's picture

Short and to the point. Positive in its self evaluation and assuredly true in its prediction, this leaves the mind wondering what that "new" woman who has emerged will do. I certainly feel the impact of image alone will drown someone in sorrow.
My mind works like;" Was he allowed a taste of the new, or only just a glance from afar?"
Again, brevity in the work allows for so much tangent. Bravo! Tim