You're a Stray

when we lay

do I clear the anger away?

 

or does it just sway

right in your face, right in your way?

 

you thought back to the virgin day

when the darkness was still at bay

when he was still around to play

before the hells took your brother away

 

i see it in your look of betray

you breakaway

thinking of how your mother faded away

and your father hit the highway

 

leaving you in disarray

i hope for your sake you'll be okay.

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It nice put as the order of

It nice put as the order of the poem....

 

But try some without the rhyme....

Break the veil of rhyme...

Go madder than your words think of your madness...

Conjure their real essence.....

Try!

 

P.s : It is just an opinion.... Keep going ....