Remember baby when i told you
I liked you, 5 minutes ago
you said you loved me
and 15 seconds later i held my
breath and prayed to God
that he would take me 'home'
21 days ( you know) i promised
i'd fall in love with you
but 42 days later i never
promised i wouldnt fall out of
love with you
Remember darling 20 minutes after
we first met you held my hand
and i knew that i'd see you again
45 seconds, i fell behind the counter
smashed and hoping that i'd die
tonight, but 56 minutes into the night
you took me home and held me
wouldnt let me die (thank you by the way)
Remember sweety... i never use to say that
i was always shy with words
but after 1 night with you
i dont think i'll ever have that
problem again (catch my drift)
25 minutes, 2 girls, baking cookies
it doenst matter what the ending looks like
I fell in love with you
aww, how sweet!
Well, beautiful, this time, I don't know if I understand your work as well as I'm supposed to, but for what I understand of it, I like it a lot (but not quite as much as I do you).
really good use of time here, well done