Proud ties. (#1 sin Pride)

Police the state
Then my mind
Have fun wasting your time

Years in this head
But still no lead
Fight to move on

The sheppard has died
Burdening us with his pride
Drugs fill the whole left behind

Above looking, especially inside
Better off blind
Honest emotions left to guide
After all loves not trying to hide?

Author's Notes/Comments: 

Yeah I think I like the original version of this without my changes thought up at 5 in the morning but ill deal with this at a later time

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I feel like poetry is a nit

I feel like poetry is a nit like shitting, you don't want to force it it will come naturally or take to much time/effort and still won't be nearly as good