why am i here
i know i dont belong
youve made it perfectly clear
everytihng i do has turned out wrong
im a disaster
im just a waste of space
like mistakes from a pen
that you wish to erase
god doesnt love me
he wnats me dead
his worst creation in life
he doesnt wanna save me
i cant get thse thoughts outta my head
why do i feel this way
i haunt me inside
i always feel so desgraced
why do i live in this life
i dont belong in here
im so messed up
wish i would die
see jia, this time your poem has been critiqued! keep writing nice poem. people will critique your poems. read other people's stuff and people will yours also. all the best to you!
Dr. Zayed Bin Zakir Shawon
wow. When i was younger i used to feel like this. I used to have so much missfortoun and such and i blamed god and i thought he hated me so i hated him back i would think if god really loved me he wouldn't let these things happen to me. anyway i really relate to this poem i like it alot