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Waiting on you
I’m waiting on you
And I'm being very patient
To show you my love
Is my only intent
The hours and minutes
Tick by unmercifully slow
And my anticipation for your touch
Just seems to grow and grow
Unable to focus
My thoughts are only of you
As the hours pass into days
My red heart fades to blue
I yearn for you intensely
As those days turn into weeks
My life seems meaningless without you
Your presence my soul now seeks
Weeks have evolved into months
And my sadness I can hardly bare
I feel as though I’m fading
Into the nothingness I now stare
Desperation and heart ache
Months now have become a year
Losing you forever
Was my deepest dark fear
You left without reason
With out even a warning
Now in the stillness of this place
I find myself mourning
But today I stand at your grave
And realize now it must be
That you’re the one who now
Is patiently waiting for me….
Waiting for you:
Your poem expresses well the yearning for your loved one and the patients you'll need to wait for them. The poem is also so sad in outcome, with your loved one waiting for you in enternity. Melancholly poem but well written and a good read I enjoyed reading your poem.
http://www.postpoems.org/authours/a.griffiths57