I remember watching the sky with you
I remember laying
With my head on your shoulder.
Against the glow of the television set
Quietly playing away to us
I remember the shy smile we gave eachother
Before our lips moved to one another.
I remember the sigh of your heart
As you lay ontop of me.
I remember your hands through my hair.
I remember your finger tips on my stomach
I remember your breathe on my ear
Like an out of body experience to me
But then morning came and with you,
Recoiled to your side of the bed-
Nervous to touch me
Nervous to hold me
With very few words shared.
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very intimate look into a moment that has left a lasting impression..very well done..
The mindscape was illuminated by the low soft light of your word choice
Like Extended Prose
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Literarily on a roll, then pfoof! Gone - Enjoyed the truth of this writing a lot - Lady A
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