One night

I remember watching the sky with you

I remember laying

With my head on your shoulder.

Against the glow of the television set

Quietly playing away to us

 

I remember the shy smile we gave eachother

Before our lips moved to one another.

I remember the sigh of your heart

As you lay ontop of me.

 

I remember your hands through my hair.

I remember your finger tips on my stomach

I remember your breathe on my ear

Like  an out of body experience to me

 

But then morning came and with you,

Recoiled to your side of the bed-

Nervous to touch me

Nervous to hold me

With very few words shared.

 

 

 

 

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Beatnik1979's picture

a

very intimate look into a moment that has left a lasting impression..very well done..

The mindscape was illuminated by the low soft light of your word choice

allets's picture

Like Extended Prose

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Literarily on a roll, then pfoof! Gone - Enjoyed the truth of this writing a lot - Lady A
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