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A Single Step
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closet boxes 2002 The cry was silent
caught deep withing her throat
preventing words
stopping up her fear
the anguish and sorrow
not betrayed by her thoughts
only by tears-
glittering on the edges of her eyes
and she stands still
an action portraying demise.
One breath
a single step
even just one thought
pulling her down
announcing defeat.
oh, my, god. love it. i have no idea why (I am TERRIBLE at critiquing poems) but something about it just stopped me short. good stuff :)
:( i don't like it. its too sad
what happened to good old happy nikki
BIG HUG
its not bad tho)
ash
Much Love
Ashley