How Can I

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I never thought it would come to this

together yet still so alone

I miss the days past long ago

before our souls did simply roam.

When true love meant forevermore

not 'till we say it's gone

where sappy sonnets meant something

weren't simply called love songs.

A time when love was not compared

to last weeks raging lust

when love and life went hand in hand

and always were a must.

I never thought we'd lose it all

the power of what we feel

if we can never keep it

how can I believe it real.

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Josh Glasgow's picture

"where sappy sonnets meant something/ weren't simply called love songs"

haha, nice.

running_with_rabbits's picture

"When true love meant forevermore
not 'till we say it's gone"

haza
what ever happened to that dear old time :(

"when love and life went hand in hand"

oh god girl you are killing me
love is still there and is still the world to some poeple hunnies

i really only like few lines, to me the poem sucks, but i have respect for it seems how it came form heart and i feel it too, but it does have some spots that need rewording

ash


Much Love

Ashley