I step outside
early, on a crisp december morning
only to realize how the world
outside my window has changed overnight.
The earth no longer moist or strong
blanketed in a carpet of silver,
cold to the touch,beautiful nontheless.
The air is nomore fragrant of flowers or past rains,
but turns my lungs to ice invigorating my soul.
The water, only yesterday great puddles
now is clear and slick,trapping all within an icy embrace.
Fire retreats from the cold,content with the fireplaces within.
But the pity is for them and not me
for although they are warm and comfortable in their homes
they will not see the ice-puddles,
the diamond-like icicles,
the first breath of a winter day.
They will not know the feeling that comes
from walking in the dark
in the first snow of the year
on this one early December morning
unlike all others.
ewww
i like this line
"but turns my lungs to ice invigorating my soul"
lucky in the sky with diamonds
lol sorry i got winmx and i was up all ngiht finding music
gee i thought i critiqued this one but maybe not
oh well its not bad but not your best
ash
p.s nice line
lucy in the sky with diamonds(bumbaba)
lucy in the sky with diamonds(bumbaba)
Much Love
Ashley