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Gone and Dead
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closet boxes 2002 These bitter tears do stain my face
why must I even try
these questions beg for answers
each and every start with why.
Don't ask me if I want to die
I am already dead
you pierced my heart with all the things
that you had never said.
What heart do I have left to break
you took that all from me
I could never turn away from you
past this heart I couldn't see.
Don't tell me that I must move on
I can't leave without my soul
you took that when you walked away
and turned my heart to coal.
I'm running out of reasons to cry
they've all been quickly used
a soul that gone, a heart that's dead
a me that's been abused.
i really like this. incredibly stated.. and you rhyme really well, not corny like a lot of ppl who rhyme. I've only written one poem ever that's had rhyming.
Good job! :)
this poem really speaks to me about someone i once knew who did this to me -
he killed me when he walked away and i still dont know if i'll ever live again...
thank you
you pierced my heart with all the things
that you had never said.
Ah, there you are. Where have you been?
i like this part:
"Don't ask me if I want to die
I am already dead
you pierced my heart with all the things
that you had never said."
oh my god hunnie this part rocks!:
"I'm running out of reasons to cry
they've all been quickly used
a soul that gone, a heart that's dead
a me that's been abused."
it was worded so well
ash
Much Love
Ashley