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For so long we were together

Still you don’t know what I need

When all that really mattered

Was that you really loved me



But the days and nights all passed us by

And my heart still wasn’t full

The days were swiftly growing dark

The light in my eyes growing dull



We need more then just our love

Something we could never find

These unfortunate circumstances

Left us playing with our minds



We tried so hard to make it work

I can’t believe what we went through

We didn’t want it all to end

We didn’t want to start all new



All that really mattered

That was such a stupid joke

Cause that was never good enough

Just ask these two hearts that broke

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last updated 11 October 2010 - 11:14pm
©6 April 2002 - 7:47am — Nicole.J.Burgess
6 May 2009 - 11:13am — Afzal Shauq (not verified)
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thanks for comments.. it's one of your good poems... the flow is very much poetic and idea id also heart touching one..well done friend

6 April 2002 - 12:06pm — running_with_rabbits
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i like the playing with our minds part thats kewl
and the whole tried so hard to make it work part :)

but the rest kinda sucks for me

ash

Much Love

Ashley