For so long we were together
Still you don’t know what I need
When all that really mattered
Was that you really loved me
But the days and nights all passed us by
And my heart still wasn’t full
The days were swiftly growing dark
The light in my eyes growing dull
We need more then just our love
Something we could never find
These unfortunate circumstances
Left us playing with our minds
We tried so hard to make it work
I can’t believe what we went through
We didn’t want it all to end
We didn’t want to start all new
All that really mattered
That was such a stupid joke
Cause that was never good enough
Just ask these two hearts that broke
thanks for comments.. it's one of your good poems... the flow is very much poetic and idea id also heart touching one..well done friend
i like the playing with our minds part thats kewl
and the whole tried so hard to make it work part :)
but the rest kinda sucks for me
ash
Much Love
Ashley