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Committed.
Folder:
closet boxes 2001 I don't want to leave
but what else can I do,
when i've lost my soul,myself
in the person I call you.
Committed to a memory
of what could have once been love,
filled with sunshine,
rain,and everything
sent straight from up above.
The sunshine seems to hide these days
the rain just seems to pour,
all else seems so drab and gray
I can't take anymore.
I wither without the sunlight
drown within the rain,
I try to swim bur find no shore
I find nothing to gain.
The person that I look at now
is not the one I knew,
funny how things just seem to change
with the things that we go through.
You don't know me nikki but I really like your poetry, and this poem especially. I can relate very much so,I love the last line:
"funny how things just seem to change
with the things that we go through."- very true.
wow nikki do i ever know how u feel.....i just hope i find my sunshine once again...cus god knows i miss it...all i can say is well said and well written
Belind
That is soooo true...Oh my! good job cept for odd typo but we all do those lol
love ya always
Vicki
hehe "bur" its but babe i love the lines "I don't want to leave but what else can I do, when i've lost my soul,myself in the person I call you." those are the best but its so sad:( love yr hubbi
Much Love
Ashley
hehe "bur" its but babe i love the lines "I don't want to leave but what else can I do, when i've lost my soul,myself in the person I call you." those are the best but its so sad:( love yr hubbi
Much Love
Ashley