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reflect you
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It felt so good to be
A ripple in the shining sea,
Keeper of the clouds,
The river that sustains the bloodflow
Of human nature on the earth...
...water.
It felt so good
To bounce in time
With the phases of the moon,
Like batting lashes upon the chest
Of a million warm pectorals
No armor needed,
Because they have the light from you.
And then I became aware
I was a reflection.
Ah yes.. it felt so good.
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This is outstanding! I really
This is outstanding! I really loves reading this poem. Your such a great writer
Thank you 48. Well...great?
Thank you 48. Well...great? I'll be gracious I suppose and say thank you.
Thank you, and thanks for commenting too!
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...and he asked her, "do you write poetry? Because I feel as if I am the ink that flows from your quill."
"No", she replied, "but I have experienced it. "
Great poetry!! I loved the
Great poetry!!
I loved the prose:
And then I became aware
I was a reflection.
Ah yes.. it felt so good.
Keep up the great work!
Thank you so much...great
Thank you so much...great compliment considering the source, sir. Thank you, kindly ♡♥♡
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...and he asked her, "do you write poetry? Because I feel as if I am the ink that flows from your quill."
"No", she replied, "but I have experienced it. "
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It looks so good to see that you are you and your reflection is just your own.
Ben
Thank you Ben. What a nice
Thank you Ben. What a nice thing to say. I was just in the midst of making comment on your new poem, "mind, the culprit". Very much enjoyed reading it.
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...and he asked her, "do you write poetry? Because I feel as if I am the ink that flows from your quill."
"No", she replied, "but I have experienced it. "