....
we are each unique
and the same,
concurrently,
*
we walk the earth
in a body of flesh,
*
sometimes we hold great joys
within us, around us,
we readily share with the world
in hopes to place a band aid
on wounds that gush blood like
waterfalls,
*
other times we hold sorrows
and the depths of pain to sheild
the world from what we ourselves
deny,
☆
and as we breathe the breath of life,
as lungs expand, so does our mind,
touching suns and moons,
*
we merge our inner and outer worlds
to unify all of life in spirit as one,
it is what this life is,
*
the reality of it gnaws at our desires to
enjoy material lusts
for material riches,
and things of the ego,
*
we try to fight it,
change it,
and we never can,
*
and have become helplessly fractured,
split,
divided,
shattered into small bits and pieces
of what we think we are supposed to be,
instead of what we naturally are,
earth and heavens collide
beyond what realms our eyes can see,
*
when we breathe,
*
angels and demons merge
together into infinity,
*
and too often,
we stand in the balance with eyes closed.
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Wow! Fking love it! Hugss
Wow! Fking love it! Hugss
Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS
"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."
You see now, how you rub off
You see now, how you rub off onto me? ♥
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...and he asked her, "do you write poetry? Because I feel as if I am the ink that flows from your quill."
"No", she replied, "but I have experienced it. "
I read your poem and the
I read your poem and the comments below you've given me much to think on.
Long days and pleasant nights
Diamond
think good
Think good thoughts. Thank you for stopping by.
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...and he asked her, "do you write poetry? Because I feel as if I am the ink that flows from your quill."
"No", she replied, "but I have experienced it. "
Nice One Respected NLight1220 ... Happy Diwali
Nice One Respected NLight1220 ... Happy Diwali
©bishu
Yes, respected bishu. Happy
Yes, respected bishu. Happy happy diwali to you too. ♥
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...and he asked her, "do you write poetry? Because I feel as if I am the ink that flows from your quill."
"No", she replied, "but I have experienced it. "
Beautiful, and wonderfully
Beautiful, and wonderfully profound.
I glad you received something
I glad you received something from the read. Thanks for stopping in! I saw you wrote some new ones and have been trying to get there to read them.. but I need to have more time than just a few minutes. Perhaps later this morning before I go to sleep.
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...and he asked her, "do you write poetry? Because I feel as if I am the ink that flows from your quill."
"No", she replied, "but I have experienced it. "
It's always my pleasure
It's always my pleasure reading your works.
intense
intense with imagery and emotion. it's dark, disturbing, gloomy. i like the honesty, but wish it was more up beat and a happy ending. however, poetry isn't all light and airy, but it's not all epic and dark either. it's shades of white to black with smudged colors in between, but long as you write from your mind not just what you're told or just from your fingers, but from your mind, heart, the soul of a writer, it's part of the exploration and shades of gray.
Beautiful and true comment.
Beautiful and true comment. This one has inspired for me, another in the making. Thanks for reading and commenting, real eyes.
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...and he asked her, "do you write poetry? Because I feel as if I am the ink that flows from your quill."
"No", she replied, "but I have experienced it. "