So you found me stranded solo,
somewhere, dear heart, up the road,
building faith to ease the sorrow,
through clear grace here once bestowed.
Shades of gray and blue around me
taught me ways to see no red.
Stranded solo, yes you found me,
shaping prayers inside my head.
Ode to wonder while in wander,
I'm to be throughout my time,
should it seem, dear, mine to ponder,
songs of rhyme here yet entwined.
So you found me stranded solo,
resting, dear heart, in the grass,
hoping so to mend the heartache,
in the wake of what must pass.
Mid-day musings stirred a vision
of white autumn doves in flight.
Stranded solo, how you found me,
tracing Heaven through the light.
Ever bright here now the setting;
cleansing hopes where sunshine beams.
Ever true, dear, 'cause your blessings
have arrived upon the scene.
I loved this - great imagery
I loved this - great imagery :)
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=-cOCmC_m23E
I sincerely appreciate your kind words.
Thank you so much. I sincerely appreciate your kind words on this piece, as well as the time you took to read it. I guess I was mainly just attempting to express some of my thoughts and emotions relating to a recent situation. So glad that you enjoyed this, and liked the imagery. Your feedback on my work means a great deal to me! Take care.
Regards,
New Wave Franky
September 12, 2013.
Quoth The Raven
Your cadence rocks with consistancy on waves of melodic poe-etics - I found it refreshing and fun to hear ~Lady A~
Thank you so much.
Thank you so much for your kind and considerate comments in relationship to my work. I'm just glad that you enjoyed this, and came to find it worthwhile. I tried hard to make the wording come across as sincere and heartfelt, as I had felt moved to relate my emotions at the time. Thanks again, as I highly appreciate your inspiring comments on this. Take care.
Regards,
New Wave Franky
(September 12, 2013.)