Why are you always sorry, why can't you ever show me?
Is it that hard that I can't even say that you always do something wrong and put it the right way?
Is it insanity that you love me so much, but I'm always the one to keep in touch, and on a day like this I get no words, except blank thoughts and nothing in return?
I'm not always going to say it first, I refuse to always say it hurts, these things you should know without me telling you, especially when I'm crying and yelling at you.
I'm just so tired of letting things go, I want it to stop and I want you to know, that if I'm going to love you I should get somethings back, a little more then respect, something that you lack.
--ds
i don't think it sucks it confuses me but i think it's like what i went throug(pardon me if i'm wrong) loving someone sooo much and only wanting them to love back with evry inch of your soul and not wanting them only to notice you when they need somone to lay their crap on... i had a boyfriend like that he mad me feel like i was always to blame and always wrong... you wanna know where he is?... when you find out let me know i kicked him to the curve when he cheated just so you know he wasen't the only and they never cahnge so spear yourself the trouble pain and tears and get out now with respect dignity and pride before it's to late and he steals that from you too because don't fool your self he doesn'e love anyone how can he thier all the same they only love one and only so find someone who breaks the mold god made and who deseves you cause sounds to me this jerk doesen't (sorry if i sound bitter but everything i've been throug... i am lol)
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I love this poem. I hate it when people say sorry.U never now if they mean it.
ashley