Oh sun! My body is dripping from heat
hotels, beaches, surfing isn't the best indeed
yes King of all stars! Land your body on me
let me feel the pleasure of your hot figure with mine
fire me, take me away, leave me no space to breath
and when i'm just about to die in your arms
the kiss of warmth between my legs
shall awaken my lost soul back to life
This is a beautiful poem!
This is a beautiful poem! Intense, yet not overly long---so that none of the words lose any of their power.
Starward