Home

TREE TALK



Be my Tree:



I want to lean

against you ...



feeling

your rough

touch

with my smooth

tender

skin



Make your mark

upon my soul -



deep

impressions

rooted in moist

soil:



soft

whispers

of Eternity



Let me climb

up to the seventh

Heaven -



searching

my way

through

evergreen leaves

to the sweetness

of your

Fruit



be my Tree:



drip

your Myhrr

into my open

wounds



heal

this feeble

heart ...


Author's Notes/Comments: 

The yearning to be understood and to be healed ... talking to the creature ... the Creator ...

View myrataal's Full Portfolio
tags:
  • Login to post comments
  • 152 reads

last updated 11 October 2010 - 10:51pm
©19 December 2001 - 4:42am — myrataal
9 July 2004 - 3:12am — Kristin Mowery (not verified)
Kristin Mowery's picture

wow, I really love this!
~kris

8 July 2004 - 4:55pm — Ruth Lovejoy (not verified)
Ruth Lovejoy's picture

This is excellent , love the use of metaphors!

8 July 2004 - 4:52pm — saiom
saiom's picture

myra, this is an eternally
beautiful poem thank you


 

 

20 December 2001 - 4:42am — Misty Lackey (not verified)
Misty Lackey's picture

a close walk with nature...