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*1. NEW POETRY I alone cannot be
What other people think of me
For I am one of many peices
And some people choose to pick up the pieces that don't matter
Some people choose to pick up the pieces that are obsolete
Some people choose to pick up the pieces that other's have laid into my pile
While other's choose to pick up the pieces that matter the most
Don't judge me based upon anything but the pieces that matter
For life is too short to fuck around with the bull shit
gotta agree with ssmoothie
gotta agree with ssmoothie but the rest is good
Great ideas ! Just my
Great ideas ! Just my opionion but I think there's a better last line for that poem, one that resonates with the whole rhythm and sentiment, great work!
Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS
"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."
not bad i liked it :)
not bad i liked it :)
The one who has faith has every thing!
Love it! Beautiful.
Love it! Beautiful.