Communion

Let us move

toward symbiosis

In fellowship

with our Earth

and her bees

 

 

Author's Notes/Comments: 

For starward

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Cascade's picture

I Love it! It's beautiful...

I Love it! It's beautiful...

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Thank you!

I'm glad you do. :)


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patriciajj's picture

It's perfect. It's true. It's

It's perfect. It's true. It's wise.  This is not only a call to respect our only world, but to recognize our profound connection to it. You poured so much wisdom into a sprinkle of words, even added a touch of whimsy.

 

Love reading you! 

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I think i

Got a little salty eyed reading your comment. I don't know why. Thank you so much. I am so grateful you enjoy my work! Big smiles.


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patriciajj's picture

You're quickly becoming one

You're quickly becoming one of my favorite poets on this site because first, I often connect with your subject matter and second, you have a sharp focus combined with an elegant style. Always a pleasure. 

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Thank you so much!

I am grateful. :)


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Januarian's picture

Thank you so much, and I like

Thank you so much, and I like this poem very much.  So much wisdom in such a small space, and so much like Haiku and Tanka.


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Thank you, starward

It came to me this morning. I had thought to edit it into haiku but changed my mind in favor of how it is. 


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Januarian's picture

And you should keep it

And you should keep it exacrky as us!  That was a good editorial decision.


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