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Steps Of Success
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Poetry Book Entries I'm still moving even when my odds are low.
Everyday perseverance is what I show.
My talents always grows from everything I wrote.
Finding my position in this occupation hope my entry is a go.
Patiently waiting to make it as a poet.
Hoping anyone takes notice in my poetry.
Also my other abilities everything I do is helping me in my future to be.
Success don't come cheap every step there is a fee.
And I took so many steps I'm on a shopping spree.
Pens and pads in my book bag when I have brain attack..
I'm ready to jot down my thoughts asap.
Using all my of my work as a road map to success.
Sounds like a good plan
Sounds like a good plan in life. Well written poetry and a good read.
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I read all that you posted .............
It sounds like you are on the right track. Not sure if you want true criticism if so it is mostly a few minor grammatical errors that could be corrected that would clean up your poems. Just let me know and I can go over them again and point out the little gaffs if you like. If not that is fine just wanted to make you aware I always welcome that from my readers. Really enjoyed your work. Keep writing and sharing.......sincerely, Melissa Lundeen.