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Can I Taste You There?
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Erotic Cherry red lips
leave strawberry kisses
on your heated flesh
Tongue warm and wet
works its magic
Feel my hungry caress
as your body responds
Savor the ache
the need
the desire
Can I taste you there?
Whipped cream delight
blood red nails travel down a trail of steel
head dips down
tongue tastes something so divine
Slide between my juicy red lips
Feed me a slice of hard heaven
Crave the carnal appetite
the sensuality
the passion
Can I taste you there?
Sensations linger on a hot night
a slow fire burns within
a wild, wet ride between my luscious lips
A shot of sweet cream
explodes in the dark of night
Most delicious treat I’ve ever had
A wink
A seductive smile
A flick of my tongue
Can I taste you there, again?
Delicious
Nice raw energy. I enjoyed this.
Honey.....Any time you want to!!! This poem is very "arousing" to say the least! When you can write something and cause some other "action" to take place with the reader, it is definitely good! Thanks for "heating" me up! Cletus Hardiman Chardiman@Comcast.net
phil-carcione@comcast.net
All I can say after reading this is.....Yes, yes, God yes!
Seriously, I enjoyed this wonderfully erotic piece.
Phil
awesome poem
I do not normally enjoy poetry this explicit . . . but I make an exception for this one. It is beautifully described and tremendously erotic. Wow! Because of this one, I want to read the rest of them!
Starward
Whewy girl. =O) Excellent! Keep it up.
oh man.. bravo... *clap, clap*.. very erotic, sensitive, and great mental pictures... sexual and sweet... i know how it is.. man do i.. it was great.. just right there.. kinky, erotic, and sexual
whoa!!! nelly that was some freaky stuff right there . I loved it great job you've gotten me all ralled up.
erotic, sensual, bold, earthy... well written. eric
I'VE read this many times,and it warrents my BOOM BOOM double critique LOL~ this poem is arousingly honest,and seems to be a fantasy that the seal has already been opened lol,and i personally think youre a super lover maybe i should stop here LOL<> again thanks and bring em on please L&P
BOOM,a nice big critique from me saying (SUPER GOOD) and i admire the way you layed it down,making yor own rules i like that ! LOVE YOUR POEM & WILL CHECK YOUR WORK'S LATER,I'M LATE THANK'S
Amazing imagery! This is so carnal, so hot, so visual, and yet so poetic it's not in the least bit offensive. Not an easy task, and you pulled it off beautifully!