High Rise Low Life

The tall city buildings tower above the smog like protruding from the ocean

The people underneath must contain themselves in oxygen masks

Those fortunate to levitate above see a glimpse of what life used to be

 

I risked going underneath putting on a mask to see the poem I wrote in my youth

 

β€œIn the hour above her the shadow could be seen

She walked on the ground as gentle as could be

A timid creature with pleasant thoughts on her smile

But her other disposition shown hours unseen

In the shadow which surrounded her truth

No man wished to reside but only see her face

If it could be that a warm embrace 

Could banish the shadow to the fire

Then let it be that I tried only to be sucked in.”

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lyrycsyntyme's picture

Brilliant concept

Put forth in such a way that it presents contrast between "what was" and "what is/will be" with such power, it's almost overwhelming.

 

Somehow, it's all encased in a beauty, how ever dimlit by the circumstances, through the "poem I wrote in my youth".

 

This, to me, is one of those poems that becomes a true place of sanctity.