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RANDOM THOUGHTS
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Time flies still we never see what's around us
Word's spoken but never fully understanding
what it truly mean's
Could you feel someone's true pain
the love they carry or is that insane
What is there to gain through all the shame
so we find ourselves fighting for better
with unknown thought's as the world get's worse
Was I meant for this time
Does the past suite my mind
I often think this world's to crowded
So I hide out like a coward
I see the gun by his head
Now the old man is dead
Look at this mess and the world is still
applauding
So sad to see their mind's in the gutter
Not another seen with this selfish lover
Cannot stand to feel, so I lay with my head under cover
Like this
Great timing.
KS
Check your spelling
thank you and will check that
thank you and will check that
J meek
Interesting
You wrote well,spell check needed,but you boldly declare your point of view about the status of this world and you had good imagery in doing this.
I just have a bit different view about the same topic )
Be blessed and keep those syllables coming:)
Poetry is passion,imagination & soul mixing together....
Words
thank you so much for making
thank you so much for making me check my spelling
And thank you for reading my poem
J meek