The Chris Before You

Folder: 
Tributes to Lovers

Maybe I haven't gotten over him
Maybe the sting of rejection still burns
But sometimes he's all I think about


All I think about is that one night
And it makes me tingle
(Like you never have)


And I want to reach out
And I want to list all the ways
He hurt me back then


But I don't so I live in these thoughts
And cry just a little while
I watch TV next to you


And I love you with every ounce
But he's still there buried
Somewhere deep in my heart


He's what brought me to you
(In a convoluted sense)
So I wish I could thank him for that


But I wish that magnetism
That existed between us
Could rub off on you


I need that spark we had,
That can't-keep-my-hands-off
Kind of attraction


It's missing here and
Maybe that's why I cry a little
Watching TV distant from you

View metaphorist's Full Portfolio
S74rw4rd's picture

This poem demonstrates what I

This poem demonstrates what I have admired about your artistic skill for years:  the conversational tone, the sturdy grounding in absolute reality, and the emotional poignancy which strikes a perfect proportion---neither too much ("gushy") or too little ("oblique").  Your consistent delivery of poetic quality makes you one of the pillars of this site.


Starward