Travelling all these years together'
Seeing dawn, dusk and drama
In our life, the hours walking with us,
Experience made you a habitual dreamer,
A flame alive with the ticking of time;
And you say life is as delicate as
A girl's heart, the innate modem
Boys yearn for, flaunting
Their teeth's whiteness,
Poised to voice their popeyes...
That's how i got you darling
2-score years ago;
I poised to voice my dreams on you;
Remember how we used
To be agile like columbus monkeys,
How we were swift when
Youth flowed in our veins,
And still looking ahead
Into the brighter streets of life,
The sun on our heads and hands;
Our mouths sang love songs, the
Memories still throb in our single pulse;
But now what do you make of
These dry sticks, these gnarled hands,
This veil of wrinkles on our faces?
Those days have gone darling
Through skin-cracks
And hurrying twilights
With an arrogant pace
And makes you and me infallids
In its onlought!
But we must exchange flowers,
The ones we have always exchanged;
Lure me once more darling,
To the ever bright soul of your heart.
A beautiful poem!
So descriptive! I like the alliteration in the second line "dawn, dusk and drama". I have a question: shouldn't it be "A Flame Alive..." not "Alife"? I also like the lines "And you say life is as delicateas as/A girl's heart" although there is a small typographical error in the word "delicate" A beautiful, visual poem. Well done!
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thank you missfa for your
thank you missfa for your kind correction. i have gone through some of your poetry in your blog and they are awesome. welcome to this postpoem webpage. meso.
milton
a very beautiful tribute to
a very beautiful tribute to your mutual love