Undertow Pluto

Electricity conducted

Conjured from the cheeks

Of clouds

And I'm swept into the current

Drifting over waves

In radiating undertow

As the tides change with my moods

In smooth exhale

The whirlpool of a galaxy

The temperature of pluto

Frozen solid liquid

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Hisui Kokoro's picture

Beautiful words from a beautiful soul!

Your heart is a pleasure to read... not many are these days!

That makes you either young... or enlightened?

I love this piece and will return to read more!

Drew Hammon's picture

I really like this man. good word choices interesting very interesting.

S74RW4RD's picture

Again . . . I can only say . . . Superb!!!!!!!!!


Starward

Andrew Reed's picture

i dont belive they clean our urinal water thatw ell either