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Contrast from skies to waters

We're both the same

Running in the same direction

Chasing the same man that gazes for our gander

Our salty flow, From up to down,

Upstairs-downstairs,corridor,

Left and right from floor to floor,

We're friendly twins, no less, no more.

I hit my chest, hear me roar,

Open our doors, to our forbidden shores,

Fashioned to us, like hinges to trapdoors,

We blanket eachother,

We're neither half way up,

We're neither up nor down.

Author's Notes/Comments: 

This is a comparison between the sky and the ocean. You gaze over the beach, into the ocean, what do you see? The sky, and the water, and the line between them. That is all. It gives a sort of enigma as to what I am, the sky or the water. They're equal, there is no up or down for them, they act as if they're gods to people, for they are of superior power.

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3 October 2004 - 12:15am — Haha you Cant find me (not verified)
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this is awesome but whats with the name it's funny