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Burgundy
Oh, parting lips
Oh, parting sea
Let me come in
Let me come be
Down the rain pitter pattered
Into the cukoo’s nest
To feed the cry babies
Hungry temper
Down we wind
Into the parting sea
That tries to spit us out
Onto the beach
Your name was spelled
In my alphabet soup
Hunger drooling down
My chin
I definitely like this one. Simple and very sexy...your writing is the type of poem that is so diverse that your meaning isn't definite...everything will probably mean something different for each person
Hey, i really like this poem, it's deep and tells alot of feelings, great job!
Liby :)