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teenie suicide dance
born into a world of glass,
neon vice, the land of flies,
little eyes are shining brass,
the net is hungry for your cryies.
take this empty soul from me,
crashed against this world of fake,
bodytrapped, my mind so free,
wich way is the one to take.
fucking special, that you are,
dreaming of those little things,
try to grab, they are not far,
losing your once widespread wings.
get my hand let's take this dance,
generation suicide,
forgetting fears, forgetting friends,
get my razor, take this ride.
I love your work very much and can feel what you feel when I read.
Take care , Delta
And why wouldn't your generation be sick? Being fed a steady diet of Darwinist human secularist gobbel-de-gook. This is all there is and it all accidentally popped up out of some primordial soup. I have heard these people all over the radio and television spreading their poison as if they knew better than anyone else, caring not about their disasterious effects and denying their culpability. If you believe what they say, then yes, life certainly does seem meaningless and cheap. Your own words, "that we all think were so super special...", well the fact of the matter is my dear friend, that you are super special and you should understand and believe what a wonderful creation and what a wonderful creature that you are. If you can dig deeply enough into our history and sift through the B.S. you will understand that the original "Bible" is still in existance. It is not what it is preached to be to day but you can still find out who and what we are and how we got here and why. You will see what power you really have and the importance of your own personal existance. Once again I find myself selling books for Tom Brown Jr. but his book "Grandfather" is filled with truth and goodness and gives a view of life through the life and eyes of Grandfather that I hope you will take to heart. Trust me and read this book. Understand that you and your friend and your generation are special and important. You are the future and the pathway to the future and it will be what you make it. Trust me, I'm right about this. James
And why wouldn't your generation be sick? Being fed a steady diet of Darwinist human secularist gobbel-de-gook. This is all there is and it all accidentally popped up out of some primordial soup. I have heard these people all over the radio and television spreading their poison as if they knew better than anyone else, caring not about their disasterious effects and denying their culpability. If you believe what they say, then yes, life certainly does seem meaningless and cheap. Your own words, "that we all think were so super special...", well the fact of the matter is my dear friend, that you are super special and you should understand and believe what a wonderful creation and what a wonderful creature that you are. If you can dig deeply enough into our history and sift through the B.S. you will understand that the original "Bible" is still in existance. It is not what it is preached to be to day but you can still find out who and what we are and how we got here and why. You will see what power you really have and the importance of your own personal existance. Once again I find myself selling books for Tom Brown Jr. but his book "Grandfather" is filled with truth and goodness and gives a view of life through the life and eyes of Grandfather that I hope you will take to heart. Trust me and read this book. Understand that you and your friend and your generation are special and important. You are the future and the path way to the future and it will be what you make it. Trust me, I'm right about this. James
well thank god you realized that suicide is not the answer.... I guess those that do this sort of thing are only thinking of themselves.... they think that they will not be hurting anyone but themselves... but they are so wrong.... the loved ones left behind to wonder where they went wrong.... and what could THEY have done differently..... to me it is the cowards way out.... this was a really good piece of writing... Renee'
I forgot about L-8 which and sorry I entered my other critque twice:) Kate
I've had a couple friends try like that. And I've had two that actually killed themselves. It's sad and hard to deal with and you seemed to really express excatly what you felt in your poem. there's a couple spello-s so here ya go. L-4 cries L-7 body trapped and in your author's comments, there's: realized and we're were spelled wrong. Hope this helped. keep writing your very talented. Love Kate
I've had a couple friends try like that. And I've had two that actually killed themselves. It's sad and hard to deal with and you seemed to really express excatly what you felt in your poem. there's a couple spello-s so here ya go. L-4 cries L-7 body trapped and in your author's comments, there's: realized and we're were spelled wrong. Hope this helped. keep writing your very talented. Love Kate
Got to love teenage angst pretty good