Watching the rain outside
From my window
The world stops, it seems...
Or is it that I stop?
And the world moves on?
The emotions flow away
With the water
The hurt, the pain
Down the drain
Outside my window
I see him waving
His hair wet
Water dripping down his face
That evergreen smile still there
To meet him
I have to go out in the rain
And get wet
With the emotion of pain...
Once again!!!
nice amalgamation of discontinuous thoughts. well done.
and...i remember the day :)
Nice poem DD,the last four line heightens the emotions to give a perfect ending.Loved it!!!