my suicide

underneath it all

the fragile pieces of my mind

my heart is breaking

all the light goes to dark

and the world slips away

the rope tightens around me neck

as you stare in disbelief

you are stunned that i could do this to myself

even more as i am doing infront of you

i cant go on pretending it didnt happen

i cant go on living like this

ive tryed before

but this time it will be different

this time i will not screw it up

not this time

Author's Notes/Comments: 

i wrote this about three months after i tried to commit suicide i was in year 9 at the time (2005) life was really miserable then

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i like this...if you dont mind my asking...have you tryed committing suicide?