If you are breathing, then you are alive,
If your heart beats, if you can see,
Then you are alive;
You are not dead, if your heart misses me.
‘You are’ if you can ‘think’ like Descartes,
If you do dream and wake up,
Yes, you are not lifeless,
Standing for justice and, saying the bad, ‘shut the hell up’.
You are not dead if you are here ‘physically’,
But your ‘soul’ endlessly flies everywhere searching for ‘humanity’.
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Does this works of your involves metre or they are only ten lines...
BTW nice job..
Thanks
Thank you for your comment. Of course metre' s involvement is there; but, to be honest, I lay more emphasis on the 'ten-line-pattern'.