tick-tock-BOOM

he stares at the shattered mirror

Blood dripping from the webbed glass

Knuckles cut

tick-

not knowing who he once was

not understanding this primal rage

beaded sweat



tock-



two weeks ago she left him

took the house

took the kids

took his keys

locked him out



tick-tock



The job called yesterday,

he didn't show for work again,

fired on the phone



tick-tock-tick-tock



the rage consumes him

the hatred overcomes him

he unlocks his lock box

takes the glock, slides the clip



times up!

and the bomb explodes as the shell falls.


Author's Notes/Comments: 

yea i am not too sure on this one, but i threw it out there for comments and critisism

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Kris Hoffman's picture

ooooh...this is quite the creative piece, a wonderful way of describing such a scene...i applaud you for this...wonderful work.