pretty from the outside
pretty ugly from the inside!

dreamy eyes, rotten mind
succulent lips, venomous spit!
more pills, one pound less...

perfect citizen, messed up fantaisies
sickening lullaby
bitten by the hardcore

one step down
well done

designer dress, bag of turds
dead body, my best outfit!

pretty from the outside
pretty ugly from the inside...


Author's Notes/Comments: 

to all fashion lovers...
a touch of anger, with a cheecky smile....

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poetvg's picture

this is funny
reality check
good poem keep
up all the great
work i really enjoy
readings your poems.

onelilartist's picture

Pretty....darn good, I'd say. LOL


Misty Lackey's picture

this poem is so true. hey, please stop by and read some of my poetry and comment on it k :-) thanks..

Rachelle Wiegand's picture

This was one great, gutsy piece of work! I like it more than alot.

Steve's picture

Really good poem i like "dead body, my best outfit!"

Mel's picture

Hey this is good....satirical, but interesting in a way....the first and last 2 lines re really full of impact. Hits me right there... Smileszs.