Upon Your Seas

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2012

get off of me
get off on me
dress your best
pull down
your sunday clothes
and I'll wear a suit of skin
the skin god put me in
consecrate me
desecrate me
absolve me of my sins
unholy communion
until I sin again
mother says this is
what my body needs
father only does
the deeds
oh won't you please
don't merely tease
oh won't you please
do as you please
on top of me
get off on me
get off of me
crawling backwards
rugburns ragdoll
hands and knees
catch me daddy
take me if you please
born to sail upon your seas
microscopic
so hypnotic
silent forceful pleas
more than eyes
caressing me
fuck me daddy please

Author's Notes/Comments: 

not sure it quite flows the way I want it to but I'm working on it

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believe me

it flows. I have to confess that I always expect you to write with such remarkable vigor and variousness in all your poetry here. It is a tendency to synthesize the traditional and the torn, the formal and the fractured, in ways that give rise to eidology.
Mental images are very powerful superseding not only the functional character but also, giving rise to the excitement of strong emotion often exhibited with such force of influence that it takes ones breath away.

stay sfe
be happy
Peace
Dylan


"One of the best results of life, is the torment of love"

Dylan Eliot