We all want things in life
We all have hopes and dreams
We try and give everything,
But some things just don’t last
In the beginning we are deceived
Deceived by all the glory
But in the end we are lost
We’re left behind with despair
We wish the candles could burn forever
That the light would never die out
But the darkness slowly creeps us
It follows us in the shadows
We try to run, we try to fight
But some things are just in vain
Although we try to never loose hope,
But some things we just have to accept
i liked this one coz it had thesame sg as mine and had more imagery(thats what lacked) thanx for th review by the way! Keep writing honest poems!!
This is a good poem... very true...