your voice, your words
are molten lava
too, too hot
to touch initially
but given time to cool,
to sink into caverns
and crevices in the surface,
a bit
they're something to build on
a new, fresh landscape
to look out onto
i've never been afraid
of the brutal truth
i need not tame nor slay
a raging dragon
with a truthful tongue -
rage on
my heart is tungsten,
break it if required
but i can take the heat
no, it's not cold steel
so i'll be fine
all i needed,
all this time
was more patience
and i've been learning
so breathe fire
fill the atmosphere
scourge the landscape
melt away illusions
that anything lasts,
but what grows back
and help me to wait
for what comes next
your voice, your words
are molten lava
when mountains erupt, i'll stay
you offer me a new place to start
the fireflies come again
out of your mouth
"and i've been learning so
"and i've been learning
so breathe fire
fill the atmosphere
scourge the landscape
melt away illusions
that anything lasts,"
So much gripping emotion tumbles through this metaphorical triumph that I just want to applaud rather than analyze.
The effect speaks for itself, but I still need to express my admiration for the stylistic impact, the brilliant use of sensory words and the deft execution of imagery.
An absorbing creation.