Rain and Pour

                hands held tight, face pale white;

                      it was this time.

                       I wanted to Cry

                               this breath              

                                 hammering

  my head



         tormenting my being                this heart beat.



           it's been long since the Rains have stopped

Drops

still

trickle

down me.

               these memories dried sticky honey

                     sweet not irritating

         Water and Tear are same            

it's just

salt

   that marks the

                                                    difference.

                              

                               Pour water

                                     dried Fertile land

                                     Water needed

                               Pour water

                                     new plants will Grow

                               Pour water

                        

                        filling the two

                               buckets of my eyes

                                     I irrigate water

                        New plants will Grow

                               after water      

                        I pour water

                                  p

                                    o

                                     u

                                    \\r//

                                   \\\////    

Author's Notes/Comments: 

this is what happened wen i could not post my poem on orkut...
oein oein oein.....

hehehee

You will see the actual comments after you comment.....
This young kid of mine is at ur disposal.
temme wat u think of it....

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Bryan Adam Tomimbang's picture

Visually appealing. It looks as if the entire poem had water trickling down to the floor. Great write. Keep up the writing!

My favorite lines:

"these memories dried sticky honey
sweet not irritating
Water and Tear are same
it's just
salt
that marks the
difference."