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Beauty and the Beast
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Love Poems Who is this girl i see
she is staring at who i think is me but can it be
that she could actually be falling for me
how could this be a beast like me and a beauty like her
why would she like me when i look like this
she is missing out on other guys
but why does she only have eyes for me
maybe she cant see or maybe she sees that i have more on the inside than on the outside
i have eyes for her but i am to shy to tell her
why am i too shy i dont know i just am
but could it be that we will always see each other for more than we are
forever together we tell each other but is it true
me and you always true to each other for another day
i am glad this maybe true me and you
this is a good poem. emotion and reason is a key factor for a girl to like u. these elements are shown right here good job.
Puncuation again. Line 4 needs a comma between "be" and "a." Again...kind of dry and lacking much imagery. Also, you seem to start and have a lot of "who" questions in your poems....try to avoid overusing that.