Playing Pretend

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Love poems

I just can't forget,

And I still feel upset,

Listening to sad songs,

And crying along.


I look at cute couples and feel sad,

'Cause I keep remembering what we had,

I end up crying myself to sleep,

And not wanting to eat.


I look at your picture and feel so bittersweet,

I hear your voice and my heart skips a beat,

And I hate myself sometimes,

'Cause I think of you and in my heart I feel a ray of sunshine.


I sometimes wonder whether you care,

I wonder if you think of the memories we shared,

I know you're no longer mine,

And it kills me a little when you're acting like your fine.


And all this shit goes on while,

I have to carry on with a smile,

Now I'm just waiting for the day when this pain'll end,

'Cause I'm tired of playing pretend.

Author's Notes/Comments: 

I wrote half of this while I was half asleep so sorry if it doesnt make much sense lol 

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a.griffiths57's picture

    Can feel your hurt and

 

 

Can feel your hurt and confusion throughout this poem. Pretending it's over when it isn't to you must be hurtful, hope you move on soon to a better and more straghitforward relationship. The rhyming is good and the poem is well written.


 

 

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lovelife123's picture

Thank you :) 

Thank you :) 


"Everybody is a genuis. But if you judge a fish on it's ability to climb a tree, it will live it's whole life believing that it is stupid"
Albert Einstein

GOHIL48's picture

it does make sense and its

it does make sense and its very nice poem :) i really loved it

lovelife123's picture

Aww thank you :)

Aww thank you :)


"Everybody is a genuis. But if you judge a fish on it's ability to climb a tree, it will live it's whole life believing that it is stupid"
Albert Einstein