My Promise To You

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I get overly-attached, or push people away,
That's why people leave, rather than stay,
I'm always trying to please everyone,
That's all I've ever done,
I find it hard to trust,
I know it's something I need to adjust,
I always need approval from others,
But that's not my fault, it's my mothers,
She's always saying how I need to be better,
try my best but that doesn't seem to matter,
I don't have any self confidence,
The little I had, left, along with my common sense,
I'm sorry for the way I am,
If you don't want to stay, I understand,
But if you do,
I cant promise you won't regret it,
At times I can be a handful, I admit,
But no one will love you like I do,
That my promise to you.

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darkpool's picture

I always need approval from

I always need approval from others,
But that's not my fault, it's my mothers,
She's always saying how I need to be better,

fascinating lines, they make me think, but it's really none of my business.

lovelife123's picture

Thanks, and thats about how

Thanks, and thats about how my mum wants me to be perfect because she doesn't want me to face the same problems she did 


"Everybody is a genuis. But if you judge a fish on it's ability to climb a tree, it will live it's whole life believing that it is stupid"
Albert Einstein

GOHIL48's picture

beautifully written

beautifully written

lovelife123's picture

Thanks :)

Thanks :)


"Everybody is a genuis. But if you judge a fish on it's ability to climb a tree, it will live it's whole life believing that it is stupid"
Albert Einstein

LostInTranslation's picture

this is exactly how i feel

this is exactly how i feel sometimes...
the poem is beautiful.


-- Jordan <3

lovelife123's picture

Thank you :)

Thank you :)


"Everybody is a genuis. But if you judge a fish on it's ability to climb a tree, it will live it's whole life believing that it is stupid"
Albert Einstein

Jesster's picture

Gosh, it sounds like I

Gosh, it sounds like I could've written this.


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Cleo's picture

All in a days work...lol ;)

All in a days work...lol ;)

lovelife123's picture

Haha aww thanks :)

Haha aww thanks :)


"Everybody is a genuis. But if you judge a fish on it's ability to climb a tree, it will live it's whole life believing that it is stupid"
Albert Einstein

Cleo's picture

awesome!!!

Your poem is awesome!!! i love it...:) And someone is just jealous; i don't want to mention any names...lol :P