You are not a poet
because I have been writing poetry
way longer that you have.
So that would make my poetry better.
Your 39 line long randomness
could never compete with my 40 line beast.
My words are bigger,
more symbolic,
like an elephant on a mountain
while your words
are fleas on a crumb.
Pathetic and no one wants you around.
Speaking of you
there is no way your 5'1 looking baby face
could match my 5'2 looking adult.
Did you even try to wing your eyeliner?
Was it drawn with a spoon?
No worries! I drew mine with a sword.
The same one I used to cut you apart.
Your circle identity now a square
just like mine...
and the rest of societies.
Dare to be different?
I double dog dare you to be the same.
You aren't yet good enough to be different.
You don't deserve to live in the clouds.
Bring your head back down here,
I have more words to say.
Sew your lips shut
with the same red lipstick I am using.
Don't speak up;
bury your words.
You missed your chance.
They won't believe you know!
You are not you now!
Try to write a poem;
try to speak out.
But, it has to be 40 lines,
not 39.
JoJo
I had to come back to say
I really like your poem
And how you stood up
For yourself.
You just have to know
How / when / and where
To fight your battles.
KS
I reread it and liked it more.
Thank you
I always enjoy your comments. I apperciate them and your honesty. Thank for reading (:
Small girl with a big heart. -Jo
Jo
I always like what you have to say.
You make me think.
I will leave it at that.
KS
I am glad you went and got some
New notebooks.