once upon a time
i visited a place
a place in the darkness
and well hidden like a maze
a word spoken in my ear
by a tree besides me
warning of the wind
of the path which laid ahead
and Evan with that knowledge
the decision was mine mine to make
cold,dark and damp
the ground spoke to every step
echoed in a world
which i grew to hate
world is gods playpen
and people r his toys
endless flowing river
of love that blinds me
at the end of my journey
at a broken down place
i stared in horror
as i recognized this long forgotten land
filled infinite sorrow and limitless pain
a place frozen in time but
scorched bye shadows of time
an alter of forgotten fate
a resting place of old memories
a knock on the rusting gate
stained my hand with the flowing dried blood
as the damage was done
i knew i could do nothing but to move forward
Dark as this may be it was pretty well spoken, well written, moving, filled with imagery. Well done. ♥